What's wrong with this character?

I think it would be more interesting if "Romano" moved them somewhere other than New York for a better life. Somewhere boring and plain, but pretty.. like Montana or Wyoming or Colorado? I don't know.. I just picture/imagine people moving to NY to attempt to start their careers as a musician, actor, bla bla bla... not to have a better life? Idk..just a suggestion. Good luck :D